We have done a task that includes with the summer learning journey, it is called Fishing false teeth.
First we read the article for us to understand what to do for the activity. we also watched video of fishing false teeth.
After, we did the first template. We did this to understand who they are, What part did they played, and What was the outcome was for them.
When we finished doing the template we did the comic, For the comic we had to try and fill out what they could be saying.
I enjoyed doing this task but it was a bit difficult for me to try and put the sentences into my own writing.
This is my example below.
LI - To do different SLJ activity's.
Talofa Lava Aliqwa,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey, it is awesome to see your first post of the summer and I look forward to seeing more as you continue blogging!
I really enjoyed this activity as I like to read and write my own comics. I especially like activities like this where you get the opportunity to imagine what the characters are saying. Have you written any comics of your own?
I like that you started your post by explaining the activity and the process you used to create this comic. I thought your comic was very funny and well written, I especially liked how he sneezed out his teeth.You told the story well and your script matched the images. After you had watched the original story did you think your comic was similar?
Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Talofa Zana, and thank you so much for feedback on my work! Also no i haven't written my own comic before but I really enjoyed doing this activity.
ReplyDeleteI thought I had a good example of what they could be saying but other then that I really hoped i did a good job.Also have written your own comic before Zana?
Talofa Aliqwa,
DeleteIf you enjoyed writing this comic maybe you could try writing your own, maybe a comic about the cool adventures you get up to over the summer! I have helped my brother write a comic before but I prefer to read ones written by other people!
-Zana
Talofa Zana,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for the idea of creating my own comic and cool that you have written a comic.
I also enjoy reading other comics rather then making my own but I think it could be very fun so i'll give it a try.
Fa!- bye